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Something silly and foolish that I've done

I picked up a book on writing fiction a few days ago, and I’ve been working through some of the exercises in it. At first, I thought they were sort of rudimentary and boring, but I’m finding that they really work to wrench material out of your noggin that you thought you had lost a long time ago between some couch cushions along with all your change and an expired bus ticket.

An exercise that I did tonight called for the reader (which was me) to write about “something silly and foolish” that he had done at some point in his life. I had fun with it, and thought I’d post it here. I wrote it for myself, but that doesn’t mean I shouldn’t share it with y’alls if it’s any good :)


There aren’t many silly and foolish things that I’ve done in my life. For the greater part of my existence, I have been nothing if not fastidiously awesome in all things.

Of course, everybody needs to slip up sometime. Whether it’s Michael touching a boy or Jesus getting nailed to a cross, there’s always a moment when it seems like your day is going downhill.

My moment took place just before the potlatch party we were having in the fourth grade to celebrate all the learning we did about Indians (Native ‘Mericans, that is) that year.

There was a dress code for the potlatch. I don’t remember all the intricate details, but it basically came down to having to wear a dirty old blanket over your body with shorts underneath. I guess that’s because the Indians always wore shorts underneath their blankets during their potlatches. We didn’t cover that during our history classes. "Traditional Undergarments of the Nootkas" just doesn’t sound like the kind of thing that most parents would like their children to be learning.

Anyway, I kind of jumped the gun on the whole changing thing. The plan was for students to take turns changing in the two large closets at the back of the room, but I decided to just go for it right then and there. I walked to the back, in full view of the other students, and whipped my trousers off, including my knickers, and that was that. For a brief moment, before donning my traditional potlatch shorts, in front of every other member of my class, I was standing there, free in the breeze, looking not at all unlike Michelangelo’s David on a sunny Mediterranean day.

Nobody said anything. It was like the spectacle was far too great for commentary. I mean, here they all were, my classmates, probably about nine or ten years old each at the time, and having to come to terms with the fact that they were seeing the most incredible thing they would ever see in their entire lives.

The Great Pyramids of Egypt…

The Hanging Gardens of Babylon…

The Statue of Zeus at Olympia…

The Temple of Artemis at Ephesus…

The Mausoleum at Halicarnassus…

The Colossus of Rhodes…

The Lighthouse of Alexandria…

These, we are taught in our youth, were the seven great wonders of the world.

But any smart child who was in that classroom with me on that day back in 1987 when I changed too early could have told you, without any hesitation or doubt, that there was, in fact, an eighth.

Published Tuesday, May 10, 2005 7:35 AM by Rory

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domus said:

Very good read. I ask, nay, I beg, nay, I'm back to asking, that you please post this stuff more often.

Your friend,

Domus.
May 10, 2005 10:39 AM
 

Lyre Pantzonfire said:

I was there that day. I immediately began asking my parents for a sex change because it was quite apparent I would never be the man that Rory just naturally was.

But those were different times, and my parents would not relent and so I remained a boy, a little boy, a very, very little boy upon whom Rory made a BIG impression.

After years of therapy, I thought I had gotten over it, but this post just brought back all the memories and the inadequacies.

My parents can't stop me now.
May 10, 2005 1:36 PM
 

George said:

Nice job Rory.

Now don't you think you should take the time to make some profit from some stories like that?

I mean all of your adoring fans complimenting you and worshipping you through your blog is nice I'm sure, but wouldn't the cash be even nicer?

Especially with the baby on the way...
May 10, 2005 1:39 PM
 

Chris Sells said:

If you're going to write fiction, read Dramatica: A New Theory of Story:

http://www.dramatica.com/theory/theory_book/dtb.html

I found it amazing.
May 10, 2005 2:04 PM
 

Mark said:

I'm still waiting for the "something silly and foolish you did" bit? Or is that it? :-)
May 10, 2005 2:28 PM
 

Hermann Klinke said:

Hi Rory,
If you do write a fiction book, then I recommend you the following cover: a picture of the same thing you just described (I mean the 8th great wonder) that amazed so many people. That will attract enough people to buy your book and make richer than Billy Boy G.
May 10, 2005 3:16 PM
 

Steve Hall said:

Being a space (spacy?) fanatic, I seem to remember a certain astronaut, probably Story Musgrave, that noted the grandest of all human monuments could be seen from space...and astronauts were truely privileged to observe them while in geosynchronous orbit.

When I watched "Destiny in Space" at the local IMAX theater ten years ago (which was the story about the STS-61 shuttle mission when Story repaired the Hubble), they pointed out the pyramids on the Giza plain and the great wall of China.

But, no "Temple of Rory" could be seen from that far up.

HHhuumm... Why do you suppose they missed that?
May 10, 2005 4:41 PM
 

George said:

Steve,

"HHhuumm... Why do you suppose they missed that?"

To save mankind.

Duh.
May 10, 2005 5:09 PM
 

Steve Hall said:

I figured someone would simply reiterate the old "'cause Mommy said so rule": "Don't squint! You'll ruin your eyes!"

Which, of course, reminds me of my first gun handling instructions received during my youth at the hands of my dear uncle Dick. He told the two most important gun rules are:

1) It matters NOT the caliber, but where you point it that counts!
2) Someone else will ALWAYS have a bigger gun than you!
May 10, 2005 5:31 PM
 

Steve Majewski said:

Perhaps it IS time to declare Rory the 1st roaming wonder of the world. People from across the globe can take pilgrimages to congregate behind him like a short, opinionated, big-nosed Forrest Gump of French decent just to hear him spew quips from which they will extract the meaning of life. All bow down and worship at the temple of Rory!!!
May 10, 2005 5:47 PM
 

Cliff said:

May 10, 2005 7:30 PM
 

Rory said:

Steve Hall -

"When I watched 'Destiny in Space' at the local IMAX theater ten years ago (which was the story about the STS-61 shuttle mission when Story repaired the Hubble), they pointed out the pyramids on the Giza plain and the great wall of China.

But, no 'Temple of Rory' could be seen from that far up.

HHhuumm... Why do you suppose they missed that?"

I'll tell you why - it's because the entire US space program has been faked since day one.

We haven't launched a single ship out of the atmosphere. Anybody who thinks they've witnessed such a launch is under alien mind-control.

The so-called "moon" landing actually took place in a Nevada desert.

Don't believe me?

*You're* the one who pointed out that my Wonder wasn't visible from space.

The proof is in the pudding, my friend.
May 10, 2005 7:48 PM
 

George said:

Rory -

Is this some kind of competition to see who can come up with the better reply to Steve Hall? Fine you win, your comment is better than mine and your schlong is bigger than mine too.

Geesh, when will you ever be satisfied. In just how many ways do you have to prove your superiority over me before you will be satisfied?

May 10, 2005 8:58 PM
 

Steve Hall said:

George:

Never fear! I'm sure that Scott Hanselman will chime in and tell us whether or not "The Wonder of Rory" is to be held in reverence (or if we should go worship someone else).

Afterall, Rory and Scott's "TechEd #1" porno...er, "outreach" video was an opportunity for Scott to ascertain said details.

(In case you've not noticed this work of fertile minds, it's at: http://www.hanselman.com/blog/RoryAndScottGoToTechEdALoveStory.aspx)
May 10, 2005 9:20 PM
 

Rory said:

"Never fear! I'm sure that Scott Hanselman will chime in and tell us whether or not 'The Wonder of Rory' is to be held in reverence (or if we should go worship someone else)."

That was actually my stand-in body-double.
May 10, 2005 9:53 PM
 

The One Who Knows said:

This is a very intimate ladyfriend speaking:

There seems to be some question as to "whether or not "The Wonder of Rory" is to be held in reverence (or if we should go worship someone else)(Hall)."

As a figurative artist, recovering nomad, and...er...observant woman by nature, I am confident in saying that I've seen a lot.

And I've decided to stick with this one.
May 11, 2005 1:52 AM
 

Ian said:

Jeez, where's Don when you need him?
I'm sure he could clear this up in an instant..
May 11, 2005 8:35 AM
 

jsrfc58 said:

"I'll tell you why - it's because the entire US space program has been faked since day one."

Why doesn't somebody just take a high-powered telescope, aim it at the moon, and see if there is a flag left up there (from the lunar landing)?
May 11, 2005 3:05 PM
 

Steve Majewski said:

Perhaps Rory really lost his right leg in a freak accident involving a Chihuahua, a school bus, and a pack of cigarettes and his “leg” is nothing more than a clever prosthetic that had to make use of what flesh he had left. Or perhaps…just perhaps…Rory is learning to write Fiction. You know…about stuff that ain’t true. We are all assuming that something has to be big in order to be a wonder. Let’s examine the facts:

1) “I was standing there, free in the breeze, looking not at all unlike Michelangelo’s David on a sunny Mediterranean day” – This could merely be an indication of his particular state of nakedness or that he’s extremely pasty white rather than that of a perfectly sculpted body.

2) “…the most incredible thing they would ever see in their entire lives.” – Again, this indicates nothing. I mean, incredible things come in all shapes and…well…sizes. Perhaps the nature of this incredible thing was quite the opposite of our perceptions. Remember what happens when you assume.

3) Aydika chimed in indicating she was no stranger to the ways of male form and that she had chosen to stick with Rory, but I couldn’t help but notice Rory’s penchant to discuss alien mind control devices in an earlier response. I submit that Rory is in fact an alien and he has implanted Aydika with a chip forcing her to become his sex kitten. Therefore, her account is null and void.

There you have it. My analysis of the evidence as it was presented to me. Had there been further details or perhaps…photographs…I might have become ill. Therefore I am grateful that this posting is coming to an abrupt end.
May 11, 2005 10:31 PM
 

Alien Sex Kitten said:

Rory, how does Steve know so much?

Anyway, I like my chip. Don't even try to remove it.
May 11, 2005 11:36 PM
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