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A Neopoleon Creation Story - Day Six - #4: Massif Attack

Just when you thought you'd never see it again.

My doctor ordered me replacement lithium. I was out when I crashed back in December. Making a mental note not to be out of it again. Ever. Still not exactly well, but the maybe-killing-yourself-IS-a-good-idea thoughts are gone. Which is awesome.

Went back to my favorite cafe to sit down again for the first time in several weeks. Decided while I was there that it was time to pick up on the story again. It was nice doing something normal. At least insofar as sitting over a laptop, writing about a despotic sandwich is normal. Normal enough, methinks.

It's been a while since the last. Here's a brief summary of where we are: we had just arrived at the foot of the mountain. We were all in a good mood, humming along to Ravel. Then one of sandwich's slaves popped out of the snow and rawked one of our Battle Chickens, breaking its beak and our calm.

If you want to read the entirety of the last episode again, you can get to it here. I just read it again today, and I'm proud of the thing. It's goofy and weird and lovely.

If you're new to this and want to understand why I've been talking about sandwich (it's a proper name, but it's never capitalized), a mountain, Ravel, slaves, snow, and Battle Chickens, then start at the beginning. When you're done with that, you can find the next episode in this list.

The story so far is approximately one-million words long.

Good luck.


With that first attack, the battle was finally underway. That it began with one of our Battle Chickens being taken down by a slave with a shovel was a hit to morale. I was worried for a moment.

I stopped worrying when Massif charged the slave and impaled him on Serge's great corn. The troops cheered. It was a bandage over morale and the bloody slave sliding down Serge's corn would send a message to the enemy. That message would be: "When a human-being receives an unexpected hole in its torso, its inside-stuff comes out. This leads to all sorts of health problems." 

I sat for a moment atop My Battle Chicken, taking in the joy of Massif having spilled the blood and guts and brains and eyeballs of an enemy combatant. Then I realized that Massif was the only soldier who could do such a thing. I'd completely forgotten to provide our men with weapons. I thought I should probably remedy that before they found themselves in a situation where having weapons might come in handy. Like a war, for example.

"Let there be guns that shoot things!"

My powers of creation were back. Every troop was suddenly holding a gun that shot things. I had neglected to round out some of the details, but any gun is better than no gun at all.

Massif had his arsenal of tree-frogs, much like the one he used to rescue Me from The Aquatic Stomach Monster. He had many, many more than anyone would have guessed, each one serving a different function. Where he kept them was a mystery.

Our army advanced again, rejuvenated from that first kill, but we hadn't made it twenty feet before a dozen slave troops emerged from a trench dug in the snow, aggressing us with their shovels, making us feel uncomfortable.

Several of our troops, with a delight that creeped Me out, leveled their weapons at the slaves. One by one, they fired.

The first to shoot discharged a very small, very angry dog. The thing flew right out of the barrel and went headfirst into the chest of the nearest slave. Although the very small, very angry dog didn't do any actual damage, it startled the slave, knocking him off balance. He fell backward to the ground, and the very small, very angry dog held on through the journey. When they landed, the very small, very angry dog stood on the chest of the slave and positioned its head directly over the slave's face.

The slave started to chuckle, it dawning on him that he had taken a very small, very angry dog to the chest, but that the very small, very angry dog couldn't harm him any further.

The slave was wrong, of course. Anybody could have seen that coming.

The very small, very angry dog eased into a low, throttling growl. He curved his lips at his canines. Then he started to drool. The quantity of drool was entirely disproportional to the size of the very small, very angry dog. What began as a trickle of slightly viscous spit turned into a fountain, soaking the slave from head to foot in stinky, sticky doggy slobber. Shortly thereafter, covered in spit, the slave froze in the snow, dying a quick, but exceptionally uncomfortable death. Having slain his first enemy troop, the very small, very angry, very drooly dog moved on to the next.

A group of five troops had watched the entire thing from the comfort of their Battle Chickens. The one who fired the shot looked down at his gun.

"Huh," he said. If "said" is the right word. I'm not sure that people say "Huh" so much as they utter it.

This troop's pause to examine his gun was a tactical error. It distracted him from noticing the slave coming up from his right who was about to kill him.

A slave came up from the right and killed him. Shovel to the head. It was ghastly.

Another nearby friendly, titillated by the interesting ammo, raised his gun, aimed for the slave, and squeezed the trigger.

This time, there was no very small, very angry dog. Rather, a Christmas present blew out the gun and landed in the slave's hands.

The slave, giddy like a child, tore open the present. Inside was a pair of light blue slippers. He looked disappointed.

Then the gun, without having been triggered, discharged a second time. A receipt flew out, and the slave caught it. His spirits lifted as he could now return the present to get something he really wanted. But, as he was standing there, distracted, thinking about what he was going to get, another of our troops fired, unleashing a small missile that hit the slave in his torso, exploded, and blew slave meat all over the place.

Over the next few minutes, the good guys (us), tested these new guns further, surprised each time as some new, unexpected payload emerged. Before moving on to the city proper, I smiled as a slave took a high velocity fruitcake to his head.

I liked war.

----

Leaving a trail of slaves, tears, blood, fruitcakes, missiles, Christmas presents, and very small, very angry dogs in our wake, we passed over from the foot of the mountain into the city.

Every light was on. White flares hung in the sky. It was bright, but it wasn't like daylight. The walls of the buildings flickered with the intense white of burning magnesium.

Massif and I rode side-by-side. It was the job of the troops to slaughter the slaves, taking from sandwich the powers of creation radiated by the immigrant workers. It was our job to be at the top of the Ivory Tower when our men were done.

It seemed at first that our break for the tower would be a simple matter. Our army was all around us, firing snakes, hot cocoa, indigestion, and more at the bad guys.

Our confidence took a little punch to the gut when we first saw the shapes of three great vessels in the sky. Flying machines circled overhead, descending in slow spirals from above, then through, and finally below the clouds.

We didn't know any details at the time of the nature of these flying ships other than what we could see from the outside, though, as this is an historical record, I have the benefit of reports from battlefield interrogations and observations from which I learned much.

-- The Great Flying Machines --

sandwich's flying machines were, despite the evil behind their creation, things of beauty.

Perhaps two-hundred feet long, they were made entirely of wood. The cabin was cigar-shaped and held together by bands of iron around its circumference, spaced at regular intervals along the length of the craft.

Jutting out from the cabin near the front of the ship were four towers, each of which sported two enormous propellers. The propellers rotated, turned by a complex system of delicate clockwork that disappeared into the interior of the craft.

The propellers were clearly designed to drive the craft forward rather than to keep it in the air. Buoyancy was handled by four helium-filled elephants, bound by rope to the ship, who exhaled to allow for descent. Once down, the craft could not ascend again unless the elephants were refilled.

Inside, thousands of hamsters in thousands of cages running on thousands of hamster wheels supplied the energy and torque to drive the clockwork of the propellers.

Up in the cockpit, two hamsters - the pilot and copilot - directed the flying machine. They sat on large stacks of phone books so they could see over the yokes. They took their jobs seriously and endeavored to bring sandwich victory despite being almost entirely unable to steer.

The payload. well, that brings us back to the action.

----

As with the details of the craft, what I know here is what was reported to Me. I cannot guarantee accuracy, but I feel it is My responsibility to provide as thorough a record of this battle as possible.

There was a cargo hold beneath the cabin of the flying machines. Inside of each hold of each of the three ships was an army of thousands of hamsters. Each wore a parachute on his back and held a little tiny hamster rifle in his little tiny hamster hands.

Some were assigned to other tasks, carrying instead bits of equipment with which to construct little tiny artillery stations with little tiny sandbags and other little tiny war things.

The bravest of the hamsters - the elite warriors - were The Swift Black Death Hamster Brigade from Hell, known informally as "Demons Anonymous."

One of the three brigades was led by a Captain Nibbles. He was a blonde hamster. He looked cuddly and he spoke in a sped up, squeaky soprano, but he was as fierce as hamsters come.

He addressed his men in one of the cargo holds.

"Our target, hamsters, is the small band of troops heading for the Ivory Tower. That is the enemy's goal. To bring down the tower is to bring down sandwich, and this we cannot allow.

"This is what we've trained for. This is our moment. While the common infantry slams shovels into chicken beaks, we'll be raining hell upon their highest ranking officers.

"We will still have to contend with their enlisted, as it's a bloody mess down there. But I trust all of you with my life, and I have confidence that we will prevail over our enemy."

As Captain Nibbles spoke, two hamsters turned cranks on either side of the cargo hold, slowly lowering a ramp at the back of the craft, opening it up to the sky.

"We are the best. Hell, we are the best of the best. Oh, crap, we are the best of the best of the best. Nobody can stop us. Nobody.

"I thirst for blood, and I know where to find it. I think we're all parched. Tonight we will drink our enemies dry."

The ramp was lowered. The rear of the ship was open.

"It's time, men."

Captain Nibbles hopped upright on his two little tiny feet to the end of the hold, and stopped just short of the end of the ramp. He turned around to face the troops.

"Let's do some damage!"

With that, he hopped backward out of the ship, followed immediately thereafter by the rest of The Swift Black Death Hamster Brigade from Hell.

"Geronimoooooooooooooo!"

----

Captain Nibbles rolled himself over in the air and extended his various appendages out in their appropriate directions.

He narrowed his little tiny hamster eyes to slits and searched the ground below for the unicorn that intelligence indicated would mark the troops who were his target.

He sneered, curling his little tiny hamster cheeks. They rippled a little in the wind. It was peaceful and quiet up there. It disturbed Captain Nibbles. His comfort zone was amid the low frequencies of shelling and the high frequencies of screams.

To take his mind off the calm, he inspected every inch of his gun, which was just about one inch. There was a scuff approximately one millimeter long marring the barrel. Captain Nibbles exhaled on the spot and buffed it out on the fur of his chest.

Next, he brought the gun to bear. It felt good, he thought, to gaze down its length, through the sight, holding the cold metal body in his little tiny hamster hands.

He aimed for someone on a Battle Chicken below.

"Pow," he said, "...I am become death, destroyer of worlds."

Then he saw it: the unicorn. He oriented himself as best he could and then pulled the cord to his parachute. There was a lot of chop up there and his chubby lower half bobbled back and forth as he was tossed around.

With expert control, he manipulated the handles of his chute to steer himself closer and closer to Massif. This is right about the time I met him.

I was facing forward on My Battle Chicken when Captain Nibbles landed on its head. I was a little surprised.

He detached his parachute, leveled his rifle directly at My face, squinted as he trained his sight right between My eyes, and spoke:

"Adios, you sandwich-hating, chicken-exploiting sonofabitch!"

He fired.

The bullet bounced off My forehead, and then he flew back at a high rate of speed from the recoil. As he shot away, his eyes never left Mine.

Captain Nibbles was calm as he soared backward over the ground.

"You're mine," he said, cool among the clamor of shovels and guns.

I wasn't especially worried. If anything, it was nice to see a cute little hamster in the middle of the battle. I was getting stressed out.

The not-worrying didn't last long. One hamster was a manageable affair, but I glanced up in the sky and saw that it was dark with thousands upon thousands of silhouettes of hamster paratroopers descending on the battlefield.

Massif saw, too. I looked at him, puzzled.

"We keep moving," he said.

And that we did.

----

I summoned a gun for myself. If we were going to have to ride through a swarm of armed hamsters, I wanted some protection.

As they drew near, Massif got to work with his own impressive assortment of tree-frog weapons. Serge was running out of room for slaves, anyway. At this point in the fight, Serge had about a dozen enemy combatants mounted on his corn. Blood was getting everywhere, and it was beginning to stink.

Massif pulled out a frog, aimed it at a group of hamster paratroopers nearly to the ground, and squeezed its head.

The frog's tongue shot out. At the end of its tongue were two more frogs. Those frogs then extended their tongues, and at the end of those were two more frogs apiece. As each wave of frogs emerged on the tongues of the others, a geometric progression flared until the final tier emerged. There were one-hundred and twenty-eight frogs sitting on the tongues of another sixty-four which were, in turn, supported all the way back to that first frog.

The one-hundred and twenty-eight frogs unleashed their tongues in every direction, and one-hundred and twenty-eight hamster paratroopers were instantly eaten by one-hundred and twenty-eight hungry tree-frogs.

And on we rode.

A hamster landed nearby and came charging at me. I lifted my gun, took aim, and fired. A stream of LSD squirted out the end, covering him in enough acid for an entire hippie dance-in-the-mud party.

The effects were immediate.

"I believe quite strongly that I am an orange!" he yelled.

"No! Wait! I'm a shower! Yes! I am a shower!"

He paused.

"I take that back! I'm an orange taking a shower! Or a shower taking an orange!

"Above all, I'm confused!"

He spun around three times, fell to the ground, and spent the rest of his short life unsure of whether he was an orange or a shower. Altogether not a bad way to go.

A group of six hamsters landed on Massif's head. They bounced up and down. It was horrific.

He reached up, pulled one down, opened his mouth, put the hamster inside, and then bit its head off.

Inside his mouth, the head bit his tongue. Outside, in his hand, the body kicked and scratched.

For the first time since we'd met, he looked scared. He flailed about, nearly hysterical.

"Guh ih uh! Guh ih uh!"

He couldn't articulate with the hamster head biting his tongue.

"Ih huhf! Heh muh! Fuhbohy heh muh!"

I reached over, stuck my fingers in his mouth, and yanked the hamster head off of his tongue.

"Better?"

Massif nodded. And then the hamster head spoke to me:

"You're dead, punk!"

I examined the thing for a moment and then tossed it aside.

"That's just weird," I said.

And on we rode.

By my best estimate, we were perhaps halfway to the tower. Throngs of slaves and gaggles of hamsters stood between us.

"We need to get to the roofs of these buildings!" shouted Massif, "We'll never make it through all these immigrant workers and militant hamsters!"

He indicated that I was to hop over to Serge, presumably so we could fly up rather than climb.

As we sped through the mess, I got My chicken alongside Serge, slowly stood, and then leapt over. The second I connected, Serge took off, swept up the side of a building, and we were on our way. The tower wasn't far, and we were hauling over the buildings. I wondered why we hadn't just done that in the first place.

Following the everything-must-go-wrong trend that had been set by My very first day of creation, Serge faltered. His right wing was trembling, and we were losing altitude. Massif tried to reassure me:

"It's probably just a cramp!"

Then large plumes of dense black smoke erupted from the wing. It broke off, and we flew straight into the roof of the building below.

We hit and then skidded a dozen feet before coming to a stop. Massif and I were spared the brunt of the impact when the mound of dead slaves on Serge's corn acted as a giant bloody airbag.

We were all in shock. I didn't move. Massif was still. Serge was smoldering where his wing had broken off.

After a moment of coming to terms with the fact that we'd just crash landed on a flying unicorn, I crawled off and rolled over onto my back, looking up at the sky, watching the dark flying machines.

"What are we going to do now?"

"I'll tell you what You're going to do now, Your Holy Lordness!"

The voice wasn't Massif's. It was a sort of sped-up, squeaky soprano.

I glanced to my side and saw about thirty hamsters carrying a shovel at me in a hurry. A second later, they had it over my face.

One of them spoke as they worked together to slam the shovel into my head.

"You're going night-night, motherf-"

BAM!

And out went the lights.

Again.


[Gratuitous Links to my Homies - Not Part of the Post Above] [Learn More]

- Clippy - Apparently, Clippy's going to start writing. I know about this because Clippy linked to an interview I conducted with him back in 2004. He's contesting the validity of the interview, but that's no surprise - it's the booze talking.

- Russell - I asked you people to provide your unethical services in tilting a contest in my favor. Although the majority of you didn't (which is understandable, and there's no hard feelings here (ASSHOLES)), we still won by a significant margin. As with all the other things I didn't get done while staring at the wall and contemplating the uselessness of the universe, I have yet to write about the contest, though I will. I have to - I won.

Published Monday, January 21, 2008 2:03 AM by Rory

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Comments

 

Massif said:

Hoorah! I have returned to fame and fortune, and probably infamy. Or perhaps just fame. Or maybe just "being heard of", like "Oh, Massif, wait... I've heard of someone with that name."

Of course, I'm totally famous in France, but they all think I'm a mountain or something, stupid Frogtards.

Awesome return to form, although I have to wonder about your sleeping habits at the moment Rory. Still, keep on with the Lithium, it's great stuff if I remember correctly. Just don't do what the Fictional Stephen Fry did in the Fictional Tale of St. Trinians. ("The red ones bring you up, the blue ones take you down, knock yourself out.")

Yes, I watched a film almost entirely featuring schoolgirls in revealing clothing kicking people's asses. Not only did I watch it, but I watched it with my wife, and proudly felt nary a stirring of hormonal wakefulness. Not even when all the posh totty were prancing around in their freakin' underwear. (In 12 rated film! Note to anyone confused by british film certificates: what are you? retarded? it's a 12, which means you have to be 12, there's also 15 and 18. Ok, so Parental Guidance might be confusing, but basically it means if your parents can find the cinema unaided, then fine. U mean Un-informed, and is only given to bad documentarys.)

I would recommend St. Trinians to anyone who had recently suffered a lobotomy, or pedophiles.

Oh, and nice to see I'm taking a more action-packed role, although I have the nagging feeling that I'll be doing my swan-song all too soon.

Yay fictional representations of internet personas (which are in themselves fictionalised representations of real people.... the difference being that I'm far less articulate in real life, on account of how slowly I think and speak.)
January 21, 2008 7:18 AM
 

Massif said:

Also, would like to point out the "Massive Attack" "Massif Attack" pun being particularly tittilating to me, on account of being a Bristolian (by adoption, I'm a scouse by birth, and an Exonian by upbringing; and if that's confusing you the "ian" suffix seems to mean "from that place I hinted at the beginning of the word." Whereas scouse is just English for "liverpudlian scum")

Further, if my previous post seems garbled and inarticulate it's because you haven't read it properly. Try reading it backwards.

Also, I only remember the theory of Lithium from my Psychology studies at College, and not because I've ever taken it. (Also from Chemistry, but I'd hope it's administered in a slightly different form why you need it for health reasons.)

Gah! I've written all this, and the stupid project is still compiling!
January 21, 2008 7:24 AM
 

Massif said:

Although I'm sure Rory realised about the whole Bristol "Massive Attack" thing, I'm just pointing it out to the rest of you.

Yay! It's finished compiling!
January 21, 2008 7:26 AM
 

Lloyd said:

cool!

What's next? Day Six Part V or Day Seven or will you go off the scale and make a 27 day Rory-Week?

This is why people release books all-at-once, because you have the annoying ones like me who JUST CAN'T WAIT for the next installement :D
January 21, 2008 11:24 AM
 

Chris said:

You have to have an incredible amount of patience to read this story.
January 21, 2008 3:59 PM
 

Andrew said:

@Massif: I would have preferred Massif Destruction or perhaps even Massif Loss Of Life -- although, like you, I think that one may be in the imminent offing. So to speak.

@Chris: Yes, and?

@Rory: I really want a puppy-dog-shooting gun. Er, by which I mean a gun that shoots puppy dogs, not a gun that shoots puppy dogs.

*sigh*

You know, if English had just kept a few more inflections, we wouldn't be HAVING this problem.
January 21, 2008 5:49 PM
 

Astrid said:

Mainly, I love the 255-tree-frog array (TFA-255?).  And it's nice to see you back, I was going through Neopoleon withdrawal.  XKCD comes in a close second, but he hasn't yet mentioned a TFA-255.  Or guns with random ammo including very small, very angry dogs, which I think is an excellent touch.

Good luck with the lithium.
January 21, 2008 7:22 PM
 

Celes said:

I'm happy to see you back, Rory. We've all missed you. I needed something silly to read and with militant hamsters and all, that need has been satisfied for now.

I'm reminded of Flame-throwing, Phasing, Poly-morphing Giant Space Hamsters from my gaming days. The only problem with those hamsters is that they are still skittish like regular hamsters, and the phasing makes them likely to run far, far away through walls and ground, etc. where they polymorph into a small rodent to better hide. I let a character in one of my games have one and they were pretty pissed when their hamster, even with all its titles, behaved like a hamster. They should have taken a page from the book of Rory and gotten a Militant, Flame-throwing, Phasing, Poly-morphing, Giant Space Hamster.

Word.

"I watched a film almost entirely featuring schoolgirls in revealing clothing kicking people's asses."

Thankfully, this is what Rory's army is lacking. Battle chickens and killer tree frogs are so much cooler.
January 21, 2008 10:38 PM
 

Massif said:

I can't think of anything in life, which can't be improved with the addition of kick-ass schoolgirls in skimpy clothing.

Seriously.

There's nothing.

On a related note, I can only think of a very few things which can't be improved with the addition of cheese.

Also, why does Visual Studio baulk when I'm dealing with a solution containing 100 odd projects? I mean, come on! It took over an hour this morning to go from me clicking the "run all these tests" button to actually running the tests. (Yes yes, I know that 100 projects in a solution is probably foolish, but it's not my codebase.)
January 22, 2008 3:57 AM
 

Andrew said:

@Celes: Ah, I miss Spelljammer.
January 22, 2008 7:20 AM
 

Celes said:

"Ah, I miss Spelljammer."

Holy, crap. I didn't expect anyone to get that. :)

I loved the 2nd edition boxed sets, I really still do. Spell Jammer, Dark Suns, Planescape, Ravenloft, Dragonlance, Forgotten Realms- these were great settings (even though I still usually just made up my own and took bits and pieces). I love the novels set in those worlds too. One day I'm going to find a new group and play with the old stuff. I have all this 2nd and 1st edition stuff and I just don't see why I need to give Wizards of the Coast any money for doing what I do already (shifting the rules around for different campaigns). I unfortunately don't own the Spell Jammer set (we always pooled our stuff and that belonged to a player), but I do still have the stats for our furry friend just in case. :)
January 22, 2008 11:39 AM
 

Celes said:

"I can't think of anything in life, which can't be improved with the addition of kick-ass schoolgirls in skimpy clothing."

Oh, Massif, you had us fooled with your above comments. Let your true colors show! : "Yes, I watched a film almost entirely featuring schoolgirls in revealing clothing kicking people's asses. Not only did I watch it, but I watched it with my wife, and proudly felt nary a stirring of hormonal wakefulness."

It's okay, Massif, we won't judge. I may disagree with you, but you're welcome to, and I respect  your opinion. *coughpedophiliacough*

"I can only think of a very few things which can't be improved with the addition of cheese."

There I can relate. ...but some people like apple pie with cheese. That is gross. That's the only one I can think of.
January 22, 2008 11:46 AM
 

Rory said:

Massif -

"I would recommend St. Trinians to anyone who had recently suffered a lobotomy, or pedophiles."

There are some important points to be covered here:

1. The girls are all in the "legal" age range.

2. Not one of them stirs *my* hormonal wakefulness, or whatever you said, either.

However, having recently suffered a lobotomy and a pedophile, I will consider watching this delightful sounding film that has received 6/10 on IMDB.

"Oh, and nice to see I'm taking a more action-packed role, although I have the nagging feeling that I'll be doing my swan-song all too soon."

Your character is much more complicated than you think. I can't say why, though.

I could say why to *myself*, but I can't tell *you*.

It's a long story, anyway.

While writing, I've also been taking pages and pages and pages and even more god damned pages of notes. There's a lot of behind-the-scenes crap going on here. Some of it will come up, but the rest will have to be in the DVD extras.

"Also, would like to point out the 'Massive Attack' 'Massif Attack"' pun being particularly tittilating to me, on account of being a Bristolian"

I know :)

Although it was quite a while back, I thought it was neat that you had moved to the town whose name starts with a "B" that's the same down Massive Attack either lived in, moved to, or moved from.

Point being, you may have stepped on some of the same dirt that some of the members of the band - who always seemed to be changing - stepped on.

I'm happy with the title. Very, very happy.

"I can't think of anything in life, which can't be improved with the addition of kick-ass schoolgirls in skimpy clothing."

I think it could be argued that, once you've added kick-ass schoolgirls in skimpy clothing to something, you can no longer appreciably improve that thing with the addition of kick-ass schoolgirls in skimpy clothing, as you've already done it.

BAM.

"Also, why does Visual Studio baulk when I'm dealing with a solution containing 100 odd projects?"

Because it's insanely bad design.

The best software is written in one monolithic, unindented wall of code sitting behind the Click event of a button on either an app or a web app.

You *always* need the button.

One project - one form - one code file - one method - one massive routine:

One Solution.

That's how I built my client-base. Efficiency, knowledgeability, and professionalism.

I gave them something nice and neat.

With my way, you never lose track of where those 30,000 lines of code went. They're all in one place. And, if it's C#, I throw in the all-on-one-line-delimited-by-semicolons formatting for free. That way you only have one line instead of 30,000.

Yep. I know - it's the tech industry's loss that I'm out here writing about a mean sandwich.
January 22, 2008 10:57 PM
 

Rory said:

Lloyd -

"What's next? Day Six Part V or Day Seven or will you go off the scale and make a 27 day Rory-Week?"

Day Six has at least two more parts. Day Seven is really, really, really, exceptionally, amazingly, downright award-winningly short.

After Day Seven, I'm going to start posting another story I've been working on. While I'm doing that, I'm probably going to get to work writing the first Gospel of my religion. I think we've discussed this last part :)
January 22, 2008 10:59 PM
 

Rory said:

Chris -

"You have to have an incredible amount of patience to read this story."

You have to have an incredible amount of patience to write this story.
January 22, 2008 10:59 PM
 

Rory said:

Andrew -

"@Rory: I really want a puppy-dog-shooting gun. Er, by which I mean a gun that shoots puppy dogs, not a gun that shoots puppy dogs."

They do quite a bit more. I made a long list of various types of payloads I wanted the things to deliver. I only got to use a few.

I picked the ones for the story at random from the list. It was fun that way - after I wrote what had been discharged, I had to let my fingers go and type out what happened. I wanted to throw in another five or six attacks, but it would have been a little self-indulgent.

Not that having a site like mine isn't self-indulgent. But, as some people in this thread have mentioned, it already takes an incredible amount of patience to read this story :)
January 22, 2008 11:02 PM
 

Rory said:

Astrid -

"And it's nice to see you back, I was going through Neopoleon withdrawal."

I was this close [holding thumb and forefinger near enough to each other that I'm petting a bacterium on my finger with my thumb] to calling you and relying on you to cheer me up after I unloaded all my worldly problems on your ears (which connect to your brain).

It wouldn't really have been all that different from neopoleon.

I didn't call because, when I'm down, I tend to hide.
January 22, 2008 11:06 PM
 

Rory said:

Celes -

"I'm happy to see you back, Rory. We've all missed you. I needed something silly to read and with militant hamsters and all, that need has been satisfied for now."

Not sure I'm "back" yet... Brain chemicals are confusing. I never know what they're going to do.

I'm still down-ish, but I'm also stable-ish.

That's not bad...
January 22, 2008 11:08 PM
 

Massif said:

@Celes,

In my defence, the only time I actually fancied a schoolgirl was while I was at college. And she was Hawt. In fact, she still is, as her Facebook profile clearly indicates. (I did less fancying of schoolgirls while I was at school than you might expect, on account of going to a boys' school. Although it went Co-Ed THE MOMENT I LEFT, and the schoolgirl I fancied was one of the first to take advantage of that. Curse you world!)

Regarding apple pie and cheese, it was this exact thing that I was specifically thinking of regarding improving things by adding cheese.

Apple pie, with proper cheddar on top, and custard... Mmmm...

@Rory,

I know the law of diminishing returns from kick-ass schoolgirls (DRKAS) comes into play, but you'll never start to make things worse by adding more schoolgirls. You may reach Schoolgirl event horizon (SEH), at which point adding more schoolgirls won't introduce an appreciable improvement; but the important thing is that this is just a limitation to the degree of improvement.
January 23, 2008 5:34 AM
 

Celes said:

"I picked the ones for the story at random from the list. It was fun that way - after I wrote what had been discharged, I had to let my fingers go and type out what happened. I wanted to throw in another five or six attacks, but it would have been a little self-indulgent."

Did you role a d20 (or some other poly die or dice) to determine which attack to go with? Or did you run a small dice rolling program?

You geek.

"Not sure I'm "back" yet... Brain chemicals are confusing. I never know what they're going to do.
I'm still down-ish, but I'm also stable-ish."

Well, just remember, we're your virtual support group and if you ever needed anything from us- like a kidney, we'd totally do it.

I don't know about a brain though. Though we might be able to spare some chemicals.

I'll get back to you on that.

"...when I'm down, I tend to hide."

How are we supposed to give you your kidney, then?
January 23, 2008 11:04 AM
 

Celes said:

"Apple pie, with proper cheddar on top, and custard... Mmmm..."

Now I know you're just trying to get my goat, Massif. But it's my goat and I'll be damned if you're going to take it from me, slather it in cheese, and eat it!!

"I did less fancying of schoolgirls while I was at school than you might expect, on account of going to a boys' school."

So you're making up for lost time is what you're saying? Okay, it's as good an excuse as any I guess.
January 23, 2008 11:08 AM
 

Massif said:

I have no plans on your goat Celes, but I do like a bit of cheese on my apple pie. (Importantly though, it shouldn't be put on an apple pie using that "oh so sweet you may as well have smothered everything in sugar" pastry that people often use.

Anyway, I was just pointing out why it took me so long to get around to fancying schoolgirls. (And for the record, College means "sixth form college" not University, but I shall stop defending myself here.)
January 24, 2008 1:02 AM
 

KEM said:

Welcome back Rory.  Was begining to wonder if you gave up on the creation story.  Sorry about the whole brain chemical thing.  As a person with brain chemical problems herself, I can understand.  Great chapter of the story.  Hamsters.  What a hoot!
January 27, 2008 1:34 PM
 

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